I am so excited, I am finally done with essay #2! Man it was a challenge, yet still pretty cool. For anyone out there who reads this I truly recommend to get help from the teacher. Mathew Jolly is awesome in explaining and very helpful in giving suggestions. For example, I was struggling with my in text citations, but he explained to me how to do it. Also, read my whole essay and gave me suggestions on certain things. I was so glad that I went yesterday during his office hours because there was certain things in my essay that he had found that needed to be revised. Mathew if you happen to read this I just want to let you know that your a great English teacher and I really appreciate you helping me! P.s Thanks lots :).